Monday 24 July 2017

Exciting Writing News!

Exciting news!! Emma's 100WC made the Showcase! To check out her writing click here.

Emma has really been working hard to make her writing more descriptive and has used lots of 'dropping in' techniques, e.g. adjectives, changing the opening, changing verbs etc. 


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  1. Anonymous7 August 2017 at 09:44

    congrats Emma on your 100WC making the showcase!
    Lattrell

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  2. Anonymous8 August 2017 at 09:39

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  3. Anonymous8 August 2017 at 09:42

    hi



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  4. Anonymous10 August 2017 at 14:43

    Hey there Drummond school
    I think these are great things to focus on for the great stories.
    I know that i love doing the 100 word challenge it is so fun.

    Yours sincerely
    Grace Yms

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  5. Anonymous16 August 2017 at 13:14

    Hi I am Gracie from yaldhurst model school i think this s great for learning this is great!
    From Gracie

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  6. Anonymous16 August 2017 at 13:17

    Hi Guys,

    Congratulations on getting to the showcase!
    I remember with Miss.Blair we did this all of the time.
    Do you enjoy it?

    Cayde
    YMS

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  7. Anonymous30 August 2017 at 09:48

    hi room 4 nice work we do 100 wc to its really fun from tarras

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  8. Anonymous31 August 2017 at 11:49

    Kia Ora ruma wha,

    This is a great post and an amazing story. I loved reading it and congratulations on making the showcase. Have you seen the ISPACE use of words? We use it in our class and it is very useful for writing.

    Isaac
    YMS.

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